The graph below shows information about the kinds of food that teenagers in Australia enjoyed eating. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the changing preferences of
teenagers
in Australia for different types of food from 1975 to 2000. The three types of food examined are Fish
and Chips
, Pizza
, and Hamburgers
.
Initially
, Fish
and Chips
were highly popular, with consumption
peaking at 100 million
meals
per year.
From 1980, there was a gradual decline in its popularity
, dropping to just over 80 million
meals
.
Although
there was a brief increase in 1984, the trend continued to fall sharply in the subsequent years. By 2000, the consumption
of Fish
and Chips
had decreased to 40 million
meals
per year.
In 1975, hamburgers
were not very popular among teenagers
. However
, their popularity
increased significantly over the years.By 1988, hamburger consumption
had surpassed that of Fish
and Chips
, reaching nearly 90 million
meals
.The rise continued, and by 1995, hamburger consumption
reached 100 million
meals
, which it maintained until 2000.
Pizza
also
gained popularity
among teenagers
, although
it started from a lower base compared to Hamburgers
.Pizza
consumption
began to rise and exceeded that of Fish
and Chips
in 1992.
Despite its growing popularity
, pizza
never reached the 100 million
meals
mark, peaking at just over 80 million
meals
in 1995, with stable figures thereafter
.
Throughout the years 1975 to 2000, Hamburgers
emerged as the most enjoyed food among teenagers
in Australia, showing a substantial and consistent increase in popularity
. Pizza
also
saw a rise in preference but did not surpass Hamburgers
or reach the highest consumption
levels. In contrast
, Fish
and Chips
, which initially
enjoyed high popularity
, experienced a significant decline.Submitted by hindgadeem123 on
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