The graph below shows information about the kinds of food that teenagers in Australia enjoyed eating. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows information about the kinds of food that teenagers in Australia enjoyed eating.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the changing preferences of
teenagers
in Australia for different types of food from 1975 to 2000. The three types of food examined are
Fish
and
Chips
,
Pizza
, and
Hamburgers
.
Initially
,
Fish
and
Chips
were highly popular, with
consumption
peaking at 100
million
meals
per year. From 1980, there was a gradual decline in its
popularity
, dropping to just over 80
million
meals
.
Although
there was a brief increase in 1984, the trend continued to fall sharply in the subsequent years. By 2000, the
consumption
of
Fish
and
Chips
had decreased to 40
million
meals
per year. In 1975,
hamburgers
were not very popular among
teenagers
.
However
, their
popularity
increased significantly over the years.By 1988, hamburger
consumption
had surpassed that of
Fish
and
Chips
, reaching nearly 90
million
meals
.The rise continued, and by 1995, hamburger
consumption
reached 100
million
meals
, which it maintained until 2000.
Pizza
also
gained
popularity
among
teenagers
,
although
it started from a lower base compared to
Hamburgers
.
Pizza
consumption
began to rise and exceeded that of
Fish
and
Chips
in 1992. Despite its growing
popularity
,
pizza
never reached the 100
million
meals
mark, peaking at just over 80
million
meals
in 1995, with stable figures
thereafter
. Throughout the years 1975 to 2000,
Hamburgers
emerged as the most enjoyed food among
teenagers
in Australia, showing a substantial and consistent increase in
popularity
.
Pizza
also
saw a rise in preference but did not surpass
Hamburgers
or reach the highest
consumption
levels.
In contrast
,
Fish
and
Chips
, which
initially
enjoyed high
popularity
, experienced a significant decline.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, although, initially".
Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words teenagers, fish, chips, pizza, hamburgers, consumption, million, meals, popularity with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • preference
  • frequency
  • trend
  • popularity
  • notably
  • anomaly
  • dominant
  • contrast
  • exhibit
  • proportion
  • category
  • significant
  • rate
  • margin
  • predominant
  • marginally
  • substantial
  • consistent
  • overall
  • variety
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