The line graph below shows the changes in the share price of Outokumpu companies in euros between January 2006 and December 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given diagram depicts the alters in the stock cost of Outokumpu companies from

January

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2006 to December 2010.

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, it is obvious that the line chart had plenty of fluctuations over the whole period.

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, the cost of company shares got less every year.

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, the starting price was about 13

euros

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January

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2006, and

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it began to upsurge rapidly till

January

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2007. During

this

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time it reached the highest point for the whole graph, approximately 31

euros

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following

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this

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, it started to decrease and in the middle of 2007, it oscillated until the beginning of 2008.

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, in

January

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2008 it again soared and about in May 2008 got cost of 30

euros

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, it dropped dramatically to 7

euros

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at the end

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of 2008. As observed in the data, the stock price of Outokumpu companies increased by 8

euros

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in June 2009 and varied next year.

At the end

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of 2010, the indicator illustrates the same scale as at the beginning of the diagram.

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The line graph below shows the changes in the share price of Outokumpu companies in euros between January 2006 and December 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

In many countries women no longer feel the need to get married. Some people believe that this is because women are able to earn their own income and therefore do not require the financial security that marriage can bring. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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