The line graph below shows the changes in the share price of Outokumpu companies in euros between January 2006 and December 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows the changes in the share price of Outokumpu companies in euros between January 2006 and December 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram depicts the alters in the stock cost of Outokumpu companies from
January
2006 to December 2010.
Overall
, it is obvious that the line chart had plenty of fluctuations over the whole period.
Moreover
, the cost of company shares got less every year.
Initially
, the starting price was about 13
euros
in
January
2006, and
then
it began to upsurge rapidly till
January
2007. During
this
time it reached the highest point for the whole graph, approximately 31
euros
.
However
,
following
this
, it started to decrease and in the middle of 2007, it oscillated until the beginning of 2008.
Nevertheless
, in
January
2008 it again soared and about in May 2008 got cost of 30
euros
.
Subsequently
, it dropped dramatically to 7
euros
at the end
of 2008. As observed in the data, the stock price of Outokumpu companies increased by 8
euros
in June 2009 and varied next year.
At the end
of 2010, the indicator illustrates the same scale as at the beginning of the diagram.
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