The map shows the development of the village of Rye mouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The map shows the development of the village of Rye mouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The map illustrates the modifications of Rye
mouth village
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Mouth Village
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in year 1995 and
present
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the present
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.
Overall
, most of the zones faced some sort of development. In 1995, there was
a
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farmland in the
east south
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and below it was the forest park. These two areas
got
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were
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transformed into a golf area and tennis court. For the housing zone, two houses were removed and the road in
fornt
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front
of it got closed.
However
, two houses were added
in
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on
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the other road, one on each side. In the south of the map, there
was
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were
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a couple of shops which got altered into restaurants. On the other side of the shops, comes
fish
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a fish
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market
that
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which
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was changed into four apartments.
Lastly
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for the fishing port, it got removed and it is no longer there. For the hotel and the cafe, the were no adjustments except that there was
car
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a car
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park added
in
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to
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the current map.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • development
  • transformation
  • residential areas
  • infrastructure
  • connectivity
  • commercial development
  • public services
  • green spaces
  • recreational areas
  • economic growth
  • lifestyle changes
  • quality of life
  • sustainability
  • layout
  • connectivity
  • impact
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