The map shows the development of the village of Rye mouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The map illustrates the modifications of Rye
mouth village
in year 1995 and Correct your spelling
Mouth Village
present
. Correct article usage
the present
Overall
, most of the zones faced some sort of development.
In 1995, there was a
farmland in the Remove the article
apply
east south
and below it was the forest park. These two areas Add a hyphen
east-south
got
transformed into a golf area and tennis court. For the housing zone, two houses were removed and the road in Verb problem
were
fornt
of it got closed. Correct your spelling
front
However
, two houses were added in
the other road, one on each side. In the south of the map, there Change preposition
on
was
a couple of shops which got altered into restaurants. On the other side of the shops, comes Correct subject-verb agreement
were
fish
market Correct article usage
a fish
that
was changed into four apartments. Correct pronoun usage
which
Lastly
for the fishing port, it got removed and it is no longer there.
For the hotel and the cafe, the were no adjustments except that there was Add a comma
Lastly,
car
park added Correct article usage
a car
in
the current map.Change preposition
to
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