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The graph shows estimated oil production capacity for several Gulf countries between 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows estimated oil production capacity for several Gulf countries between 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart gives information about the estimated oil production capacity for some Gulf nations between 1990 and 2010 
Overall
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, it seems that Saudi Arabia is increasing and
also
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 at the highest
rate
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 of all the years. Iraq, UAE, and Kuwait have almost the same number in the data.
However
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, Iran is a little higher than them, and obviously, Qatar represented the lowest
rate
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 among them. Begin with Saudi Arabia, which shows increasing from 1990 until 2010, in 1990, it was 8 per day and became almost 15 in 2010, moving to UAE in 1990 was two and went up to 4 in 2010, and that led to Iraq, which almost the same
rate
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 as UAE, in 1990 was two and jump to 4 per day in 2010. Iran increased a little by 3 in 1990 and went up in 2010 to just 4, and Kuwait went up from 1990 to 2010, and from 1 to 4 per day eventually, Qatar ranked as the lowest among them and
also
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 had a fixed
rate
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 from 1990 until 2010 except that 2000 increased a little.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words rate with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • estimated
  • oil production capacity
  • Gulf countries
  • period between 1990 and 2010
  • main features
  • comparisons
  • significant increase
  • decrease
  • relatively stable
  • overall trend
  • highest production capacity
  • lowest production capacity
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