The table below shows local catches and imports of fresh fish into Perth, Australia for the years 2004 - 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given table shows the amount of fresh just above 8000 in 2008, and through the following years till 2014, decreased.
fish
in tons
, caught or imported into Perth, Australia from 2004 to 2014.
Overall
, the trend for catching and importing fresh fish
was increasing.
Regarding the
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The
tons
of fresh fish
locally fished, was around 2500 tons
in 2004, which rose to its maximumChange preposition
of
Finally
. it stood at approximately 5000 tons
in 2014.
As for the tons
of fish
imported to Perth, Australia, it started at around 450 in 2004, which experienced a rising fluctuation until 2012, which was its maximum, and decreased through the rest of the report and stood at just under 6000 in 2014. On the other hand
the total amount of fresh fish
consumption in Perth, Australia experienced an upward trend during this
study. To be precise, the total amount of fish
consumed in 2004, was marginally above 3000, while
sored to 8000 in 2010, which was its high and declined to under 6000 in 2014, while
was still over that of 2004.Submitted by kmmokhberi on
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