People
nowadays
are preferringWrong verb form
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eating
junk
foodsFix the agreement mistake
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despite knowing its consequences on health. Some
people
believesChange the verb form
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that it is important to impose
taxAdd an article
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on unhealthy
food
items
whereas
other says that it is not necessary to force
fatCorrect article usage
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tax
. In my opinion,
taxCorrect article usage
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on unhealthy
food
should be imposed as
people
now are becoming unhealthy and obese
due to
the consumption of more
junk
food
.
Recently, one news channel did a poll and
askWrong verb form
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regrading
food
,
people
love to eat and
junk
food
was clearly a winner as 90% preferred it. The consequences that we see from eating outside
food
isCorrect subject-verb agreement
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alarming.
ComparingWrong verb form
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to
lastCorrect article usage
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decade,
lifeAdd an article
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span of
individualFix the agreement mistake
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has dropped drastically.
Moreover
, young
people
are more obese now and we can see they are less healthier than old generation
people
. It is because of
typeCorrect article usage
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of
food
they are consuming. Young
people
working in
officeFix the agreement mistake
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prefer to eat
junk
food
itemFix the agreement mistake
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rather than
eating Verb problem
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fruits even if
fruitCorrect article usage
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shop is
also
there. So, It is
betterAdd an article
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option to apply
tax
on these
food
items
to reduce consumption of these
food
items
. To illustrate,
purchaseCorrect article usage
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of various soft drinks in India reduced significantly after
tax
was imposed on them.
On the contrary
, it can be unfair to enforce
taxFix the agreement mistake
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on some sections of society. Fast
food
is considerably more affordable as compared to healthy
food
. So, imposing
taxCorrect article usage
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will make it costlier and will be cruel for some individuals.
Moreover
, increased taxes will collapse the fast
food
industry. They play a vital role in the economic growth of
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and a sudden decline in
purchaseAdd an article
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of
junk
food
items
due to
impositionCorrect article usage
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of taxes can lead to instability and various other issues.
To conclude
, even though, we know that implementing
taxCorrect article usage
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will cause
problemFix the agreement mistake
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toChange preposition
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some
people
as well as
some
industryFix the agreement mistake
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but Correct word choice
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it
is Unnecessary verb
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is necessary to have
taxCorrect article usage
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on various
food
items
which are unhealthy as it
causingWrong verb form
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us various health issues.
Moreover
, life span is reduced now. Various diseases like diabetes, hypertension,
cholesterolCorrect word choice
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are common especially in youth
due to
consumptionCorrect article usage
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of fast
food
.