The bar chart shows the percentage of school children learning to play different musical instrument in 2005, 2010 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart above depicts information about the percentage of
children
who learn and play various type
of musical Fix the agreement mistake
types
instuments
from 2005 to 2015 at one particular school. Correct your spelling
instruments
Overall
it can be seen that piano and guitar show a constantly
increase. Change the word
constant
Otherwise
, violin
was different and Add an article
the violin
same
goes Correct article usage
the same
to
drums.
Change preposition
for
Initially
, in 2005, children
who played piano were as much as 11 per cent
. Then
, significantly upward to 20 per cent
. In 2015, the number was sharply up to 38 per cent
. Besides
, in 2005, children
who engaged to learn guitar were approximately 9 per cent
. Subsequently
, smoothly
higher to 19 per Correct pronoun usage
it smoothly
cent
, in 2010. After that, continuously rose until
40 per Change preposition
to
cent
.
On the other sides, children
who used drums were very little, only around 5 per cent
. In five
Correct article usage
the five
next
years ahead, the percentage Correct word choice
apply
was
Unnecessary verb
apply
stagnanted
. In 2015, the number slightly climbed to 8 per Correct your spelling
stagnant
stagnated
cent
. Last
instrument, Correct article usage
The last
children
who liked to play violin
were about 8 per Change the article
the violin
cent
. Afterwards, the percentage was consistently downgrade
from time to time. Respectively, 7 per Change the verb form
was consistently downgraded
was consistently downgrading
cent
in 2010 and 5 per cent
in 2015.Submitted by wishmeluck on
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