The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart compares people’s buying and drinking habits of two kinds of beverages (
coffee
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and
tea
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) in five Australian
cities
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.
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, in all
cities
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except
Adelaide
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, more people went to a
cafe
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for
coffee
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or
tea
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than bought fresh or
instant
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coffee
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. In
Adelaide
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, going to a
cafe
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and buying
instant
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coffee
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were actually common In terms of the three
cities
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with the highest proportion of residents who preferred
instant
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coffee
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than
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fresh
coffee
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, Hobart, Brisbane, and
Adelaide
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both stood at around 54%, 53%, and precisely 50%, respectively. In these three
cities
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, the gap between the proportion of residents who preferred fresh
coffee
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to
instant
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coffee
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was quite high at around 15% each. Meanwhile, in two other
cities
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, Sydney and Melbourne, the percentage of the
population
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that bought
instant
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coffee
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in the
last
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four weeks stood at just below 50% and exactly 45%, respectively. Meanwhile, the amount of residents who preferred fresh
coffee
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stood at around 42% and just below 45%, respectively. In regard to the
population
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that went to a
cafe
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for
coffee
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or
tea
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in the
last
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month in each of the five
cities
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, the same trend was observed, except in
Adelaide
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. Melbourne and Hobart were the two
cities
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with the highest
population
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that went to cafes, which stood at around 62% both.
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followed by Sydney and Brisbane, which stood at just above 60% and just above 55%, respectively.
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, below half of the
population
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in
Adelaide
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went to a
cafe
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for
coffee
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or
tea
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in the
last
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four weeks
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 69%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, tea, cities, adelaide, cafe, instant, population with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just below" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey
  • coffee
  • tea
  • buying habits
  • drinking habits
  • Australian cities
  • consumption
  • respondents
  • regular
  • participants
  • levels
  • observed
  • popular
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