The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart compares people’s buying and drinking habits of two kinds of beverages (
coffee
and
tea
) in five Australian
cities
.
Overall
, in all
cities
except
Adelaide
, more people went to a
cafe
for
coffee
or
tea
than bought fresh or
instant
coffee
. In
Adelaide
, going to a
cafe
and buying
instant
coffee
were actually common In terms of the three
cities
with the highest proportion of residents who preferred
instant
coffee
than
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to
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fresh
coffee
, Hobart, Brisbane, and
Adelaide
both stood at around 54%, 53%, and precisely 50%, respectively. In these three
cities
, the gap between the proportion of residents who preferred fresh
coffee
to
instant
coffee
was quite high at around 15% each. Meanwhile, in two other
cities
, Sydney and Melbourne, the percentage of the
population
that bought
instant
coffee
in the
last
four weeks stood at just below 50% and exactly 45%, respectively. Meanwhile, the amount of residents who preferred fresh
coffee
stood at around 42% and just below 45%, respectively. In regard to the
population
that went to a
cafe
for
coffee
or
tea
in the
last
month in each of the five
cities
, the same trend was observed, except in
Adelaide
. Melbourne and Hobart were the two
cities
with the highest
population
that went to cafes, which stood at around 62% both.
Then
followed by Sydney and Brisbane, which stood at just above 60% and just above 55%, respectively.
In contrast
, below half of the
population
in
Adelaide
went to a
cafe
for
coffee
or
tea
in the
last
four weeks
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey
  • coffee
  • tea
  • buying habits
  • drinking habits
  • Australian cities
  • consumption
  • respondents
  • regular
  • participants
  • levels
  • observed
  • popular
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