The line graph shows the percentages of Australian exports with four countries.
The line graph demonstrates how much Australia exported in percentage to Japan,
US
, China and India from 1990 to 2012.
Correct article usage
the US
While
exports
to some countries had a tendency to increase, the others had the opposite pattern.
Noticeably, although
the percentage of exports
to China and India composed 3% each in 1990, their figures increased by 25 and 2 percent
respectively for the whole period. From 1990 to 2005, after the Change the spelling
per cent
exports
to China tripled to 10%, they jumped to a quarter of the Australian exports
. For the last
two years, there was a growth of 3%, while
India’s import
dropped from Fix the agreement mistake
imports
its
peak of 7% to 5% in Correct pronoun usage
their
this
period. However
, the latter one experienced no fluctuation in the imports from 1990 to 2000.
By contrast
, though Japan was the biggest importer of Australian goods at the beginning of the period, constituting a massive 26%, its exports
were declining smoothly throughout to become the second most popular importer with 16%. Meanwhile,the percentage of exports
to the US was fluctuating, decreasing from 11% to 6%. While
there was a drop to 8 percent
in 1995, the figures went back to the previous values in 2000. From 2000 to 2010, there was a fall again to 5% before a little growth Change the spelling
per cent
by
1%.Change preposition
of
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