The map below is of the the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned of the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and maek comparison where relevant.
This
figure shows the town
of GARLSDON. A new supermarket with the sign ‘’S’’ is planned for this
town
. They considered two possible areas for this
place
.
Overall
, in this
map, GARLSDON with a 65000 population
has four different regions countryside, town
centre
, housing, and industry. The first possible place
is considered in the countryside with S1 and the other place
may be constructed in the Town
Centre
with S2.
The S1 area is placed between the railway and main roads on the northwest of GARLSDON. This
place
is a 12km distance to Hindon with a 10000 population
.
The S2 site is almost on the southern of the map in the town
centre
with no traffic zone. This
place
also
is near the railway and two main roads pass from the eastern and western of the town
centre
. One of them is Brandon with 16km and 15000 population
is on the west and the other one is Cransdon with 25km and 29000 population
is on the east.Submitted by brightstargalaxy on
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