You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say why a driving licence is advantageous • recommend a driving school • give any extra guidance/tips You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear..., You should write at least 150 words.
Dear katti,
Im
writing to you in connection with Correct your spelling
I'm
driving
licence you Add an article
the driving
want
to take Wrong verb form
have wanted
since
one year. In our previous Change preposition
for
Correct your spelling
conversation
conversations
coversation
you Add a comma
coversation,
have
mentioned Unnecessary verb
apply
about
the camping place you want to visit Change preposition
apply
this
summer and I could'nt
stop thinking about it ever since.
To travel around in these exotic palaces it is recommended to have a comfortable vehicle and to rent a car or U-hal travel van Pro licence is required. I know that you already have Correct your spelling
couldn't
learning
licence but are Correct article usage
a learning
little
nervous Correct article usage
a little
to
Change preposition
about
give
Verb problem
taking
driving
test for Correct article usage
a driving
pro
exam. In my point of view, a good driving school can actually help you get over that fear. They Add an article
the pro
a pro
also
take care of exam date booking and location.
In your area I have shortlisted some of the best schools, that
is
Drivers Correct your spelling
as
home learners school
. They currently have a Correct your spelling
Home Learners School
hoilday
discount going on and you can benefit Correct your spelling
holiday
out of
it. Make sure there to choose early mornings to Change preposition
from
learning
and be slow on busy roads.
Change the verb form
learn
Cant
wait to go on Correct your spelling
Can't
road
trip and that fun camping with you. Wish you good luck Add an article
a road
for
the upcoming driving test.
Regards,
MayuriChange preposition
with
Submitted by mayuri_3006 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
grammatical accuracy
Ensure you carefully proofread your letter to correct minor grammatical errors such as "Im" instead of "I'm", "could'nt" instead of "couldn't", and "hoilday" instead of "holiday".
coherence
To improve coherence, try to use transition words and phrases to better connect your ideas. For example, you could start the second paragraph with "Firstly," and the third paragraph with "Additionally,". This helps guide the reader through your points logically.
task response
Consider giving more specific advice and detailing your recommendations. For instance, mentioning the types of courses offered by the recommended driving school or personal experiences can improve the completeness of your task response.
organization
Your letter is generally well-organized with a clear opening, body, and closing.
writing tone
The writing tone is friendly and supportive, which is appropriate for writing to a friend.
task achievement
The letter successfully addresses the three main points: the advantages of a driving licence, recommending a driving school, and giving extra guidance/tips.