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Writing Samples
Band 5

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say why a driving licence is advantageous • recommend a driving school • give any extra guidance/tips You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear..., You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear katti,
Im
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I'm
 writing to you in connection with
driving
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the driving
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 licence you
want
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 to take
since
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for
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 one year. In our previous
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conversation
conversations
coversation
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 you
have
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mentioned
about
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the camping place you want to visit
this
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 summer and I
could'nt
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couldn't
 stop thinking about it ever since. To travel around in these exotic palaces it is recommended to have a comfortable vehicle and to rent a car or U-hal travel van Pro licence is required. I know that you already have
learning
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 licence but are
little
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a little
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 nervous
to
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about
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give
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driving
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a driving
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 test for
pro
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the pro
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 exam. In my point of view, a good driving school can actually help you get over that fear. They
also
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 take care of exam date booking and location. In your area I have shortlisted some of the best schools,
that
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is
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home learners school
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Home Learners School
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. They currently have a
hoilday
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holiday
 discount going on and you can benefit
out of
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 it. Make sure there to choose early mornings to
learning
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 and be slow on busy roads.
Cant
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 wait to go on
road
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a road
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 trip and that fun camping with you. Wish you good luck
for
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 the upcoming driving test. Regards, Mayuri

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grammatical accuracy
Ensure you carefully proofread your letter to correct minor grammatical errors such as "Im" instead of "I'm", "could'nt" instead of "couldn't", and "hoilday" instead of "holiday".
coherence
To improve coherence, try to use transition words and phrases to better connect your ideas. For example, you could start the second paragraph with "Firstly," and the third paragraph with "Additionally,". This helps guide the reader through your points logically.
task response
Consider giving more specific advice and detailing your recommendations. For instance, mentioning the types of courses offered by the recommended driving school or personal experiences can improve the completeness of your task response.
organization
Your letter is generally well-organized with a clear opening, body, and closing.
writing tone
The writing tone is friendly and supportive, which is appropriate for writing to a friend.
task achievement
The letter successfully addresses the three main points: the advantages of a driving licence, recommending a driving school, and giving extra guidance/tips.
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