You stayed at your friends’ house when you participated in a business seminar in New Zealand. You left a file with important documents in your room. Write a letter to your friend, describing the file and ask him/her to return it to you by post.

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Dear Navneet, I hope you and your family are doing splendidly. I am doing great too. I am writing

this

letter in regard to the

file

which I left at your home whole my stay

last

month. Let me describe the

file

so that you can find it easily without any delay. The cover of my

file

is red and it has a small flower printed at the bottom. When you open the

file

you will see paper prints of my passport

as well as

my original degree which I borrowed because I was required to enter the business seminar which I attended during my trip to your hometown. Now I want you to post my

file

on the earliest basis as you know I have an important job interview next week for which I will need my original documents. Just because

this

file

is crucial for me it is your duty to send it safely through Canada Post Express option. I hope you can understand my situation and you will prioritize

this

task. Hope to see you again on my next trip. Best regards Arshdeep

kaur

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Kaur

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Submitted by arshkaurbrar on Tue Sep 17 2024

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task achievement

Ensure there are no typos or small grammatical errors, such as 'whole my stay' which should be 'during my stay'.

coherence cohesion

Use paragraphs effectively to separate ideas. For example, the description of the file and the request to send it can be in separate paragraphs.

task achievement

The tone is polite and appropriate for a letter to a friend.

coherence cohesion

The letter has a clear structure with a greeting, body, and closing.

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

187 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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accommodation
hospitality
gratitude
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confidential
postal service
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tracking number
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airmail
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registered post
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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?