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The bar chart shows the average number of hours that men and women spend doing activities around the home.

The bar chart shows the average number of hours that men and women spend doing activities around the home.
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The bar chart illustrates the average
hours
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 that
men
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 and
women
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 spend per
week
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 on various activities around their homes. At first
glance
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 it is evident that, with the exception of reading,
women
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 spend more
time
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 on household chores than
men
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,
while
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men
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 spend more
time
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 on leisure activities. With regards to household chores,
women
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 spend the most
time
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 on cooking, at 15
hours
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 per
week
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, compared to approximately 9 for
men
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.
Women
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also
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 spend more than double the amount of
time
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 than
men
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 cleaning the house, though
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 chore consumes less
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 than the other chores for both sexes. Again, washing up is predominantly a task undertaken by
women
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 rather than
men
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, at 7 and 5
hours
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 respectively. Turning to leisure activities, the most popular is watching television, with slightly more
men
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 than
women
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 partaking in
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 activity on a weekly basis. Interestingly,
Men
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 spend nearly 3 times more
time
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 than
women
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 surfing the Internet. The
hours
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 spent on reading are fairly similar for males and females at around 5 per
week
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. Gardening accounts for a just few
hours
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 per
week
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 for both sexes.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, men, women, week, time with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • average hours
  • gender disparity
  • domestic tasks
  • household chores
  • cultural norms
  • employment status
  • work-life balance
  • time allocation
  • domestic workload
  • care responsibilities
  • inequality
  • distribution of labor
  • domestic sphere
  • traditional roles
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