The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals, of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals, of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
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The pie charts illustrate data about the average percentages of three types of nutrients that
consumed
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in daily
meals
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in the
USA
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which could be risky for health if eaten too much. In general, what stands out from the graphs is that dinners and snacks are the least healthy
meals
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in the
USA
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compare
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to breakfasts which it is the healthiest
meals
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by containing the lowest percentage of Sodium, Saturated fat and Added sugar. Looking at the details, as regards dinner
meals
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, it can be seen that dinners contain about 43 and 37
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percent
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per cent
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of Sodium and Saturated fat respectively which in
case
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the case
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of being
healthy
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a healthy
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meal, it is the worst meal in the
USA
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.
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this
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, Added sugar
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have
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42
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a 42
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percent
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share in snacks which makes it an unhealthy meal for individuals if eaten too much.
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, breakfasts are the most healthy meal in the
USA
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by having the lowest averages among other
meals
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with Sodium at about 14
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percent
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per cent
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, and 16
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percent
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per cent
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for
the
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apply
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Saturated fat and Added sugar.
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the figures for
the
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lunch
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quite well,
but
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it could be risky for people in the
USA
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if they
do
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are
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not
be
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careful about their
meals
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words meals, usa, percent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Nutrients
  • Unhealthy
  • Daily intake
  • Percentage
  • Carbohydrates
  • Fats
  • Proteins
  • Meals
  • Balanced diet
  • Consumption
  • Excess
  • Health implications
  • Obesity
  • Diabetes
  • Heart disease
  • Convenience foods
  • Fast foods
  • Socioeconomic factors
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Healthy eating habits
  • Dietary recommendations
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