You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph shows the proportion of energy that was produced from coal in four European countries from 1995 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph shows the proportion of energy that was produced from coal in four European countries from 1995 to 2010. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph compares the
production
of
energy
from coal in
Sweden
, France, Denmark and Germany between 1995 and 2010.
Overall
, the percentage of
energy
produced from coal declined in all four countries over the timeframe. There was a dramatic fall in
the
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production
in Denmark and Germany. Denmark’s
production
of
energy
from coal stood at 60% in 1995, higher than the other four countries.
However
,
production
levels dropped sharply over the next 15 years to finish at 10% in 2010, which was the lowest of that year.
Energy
production
from coal in Germany followed a similar pattern, beginning the
period
at just under 60% and falling significantly, though unlike Denmark it fell to a low of only 5% in 2007 and
then
increased again to approximately 18%.
In contrast
,
Sweden
and France saw more moderate falls over the
period
. 35% of
energy
came from coal in
Sweden
in 1995, and
this
proportion gradually declined over the
period
to finish at approximately 28% in 2010, the highest of the four countries,
while
the percentage produced in France remained just under that of
Sweden
over the 15-year
period
.
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Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.

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