The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.
The following picture illustrates how the electricity is produced by geothermal energy. The process of generating electricity from geothermal energy consists of 5 main steps, using cold
water
primarily.
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Firstly
, the cold Linking Words
water
is pumped 4.5 km down the earth’s surface to reach the injection well. Use synonyms
Then
, the cold Linking Words
water
passes through a geothermal zone, where the rocks are hot, warming it. Once the hot Use synonyms
water
travels across the hot rocks and reaches the production well, it is pumped 4.5 km back up and enters a condenser. The condenser acts as a container for the hot Use synonyms
water
, and it is now filled with the hot Use synonyms
water
and its Use synonyms
vapor
. In the fifth stage, the steam produced by the hot Change the spelling
vapour
water
is used to power a turbine, which is connected to a generator.
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Finally
, the generator is powered by the turbine, as they are connected, and generates electricity.Linking Words
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