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cambridge15- general- test 1 In many countries, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular ? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas ?

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In
contemporary
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 world,
people
 have a tendency to spend their time
on
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watching movies and reading books; one of the most popular topics in these fields is
crime
. There are several reasons behind
this
 fame and in my perspective ,the advantages which
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 kinds of books and films bear outweigh its drawbacks. causes of
this
 subject and my opinion about it will be discussed in the following paragraphs. As mentioned above, there are some obvious reasons which demonstrate the causes of
crime
 genre success;
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most outstanding one,
excitements
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 and interactive actions in
this
 field can be pointed out.
In other words
,
crime
 movies and books arouse
curiosity
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 sense of audiences and encourage them to find truths and sort out solutions for mysteries, the subject which is a stimulus factor to absorb audiences' attention.
Besides
,
crime based
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 stories illustrate some social issues of each nation around the world,
thus
people
's awareness increases about these problems, they have a tendency to realize
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the difficulties of their counterparts and the way that they withstand
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;
crime
 series and readings are the most convenient way to become in touch with these subjects.
Although
, some opine that dramas and novels which contain
crime
 fiction will cause a growth in the violence range, I opine that they benefit society in diverse areas.
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, some believe that
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 of
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 field will
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raise
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 society's hidden anger, the subject which will
causes
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 more crimes
such
 as vandalism, stealing,
murdering
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 and many other criminal actions. In my notion, watching and reading about
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 fields,
however
, bear more learning points for individuals.
For example
, by watching a movie about
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 annoying of women,
people
 will
be become
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 aware of
cautionary
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the cautionary
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 elements of
such
 action,
thus
 they will be more concentrated
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 the hazardous signs. In conclusion,
crime
 novels and shows have gained more fame among the
people
 in
last
 decades
due to
 their exciting and real stories; in my viewpoint,
such
 reputation will bear efficient points for societies as they can be an element for realizing social issues.
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task achievement
The essay's introduction is clear, but it might be beneficial to avoid phrases like 'as mentioned above' since this is the first time you are laying out your points. Consider stating directly what the main reasons for the popularity of crime genres are.
coherence cohesion
Make sure to connect your points with clear linking words and phrases, as the argumentation can sometimes feel disjointed. For example, instead of 'Besides,' you could use 'Additionally' to create a smoother transition.
coherence cohesion
Some sentences are convoluted and could benefit from being broken up into shorter, more concise statements. For instance, 'crime movies and books arouse curiosity sense of audiences and encourage them to find truths and sort out solutions for mysteries' could be simplified.
coherence cohesion
The essay is well-structured, with a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion.
task achievement
You successfully addressed the task's requirements, providing reasons for the popularity of crime genres and your personal opinion on them.
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