The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it is distributed.
The data shows information about the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one centre of The UK.
Overall
, the total in the table did increase, all of them went up, and in the charts, the salaries decreased, technology and buildings and transport increased.
Begin with the national government in 2017 was 175.5m and went up to 177.8m in 2018, the local taxes were 91m and became 102m in 2018. The other sources almost stayed the same they just increased by 0.5m and became 38.5m, however
, the total in 2017 represented 304.7m, and it raised
to 318.6m in 2018.
Starting with charts, the salaries were 75% in 2017, and it decreased to 69% in 2018. Verb problem
increased
However
, technology was the opposite, which increased in 2017 by 8% and became 14% in 2018. Eventually, the buildings and transport remained, which is 14 per cent for both years.Submitted by ahmedaziz9811 on
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