the graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
The line graph illustrates the percentage of elderly
people
whose ages are 65 and above from 1940 to 2040 in Japan, Sweden and the Use synonyms
USA
.
The Use synonyms
number
of elderly Use synonyms
people
in the Use synonyms
USA
started at 9% in 1940, Use synonyms
then
the Linking Words
number
increased to exactly 15% over the next 40 years. Since Use synonyms
then
, the percentage decreased by 1% until 2020 before rising drastically to about 23% Linking Words
at the end
of the period.
More or less 7% of the Swedish Linking Words
people
were over 65 years old. Sweden shared the same trend with the Use synonyms
USA
until 1990 with a gap of 1% below. Use synonyms
Nevertheless
, the population of ageing Linking Words
people
went up to precisely 20% before 2020. It is predicted that the population will drop by 2% followed by a rise to slightly above 25% in 2040.
5% of the Japanese population was old, yet the Use synonyms
number
dropped by 3% in the next few decades. The trend shifted in 1990 when the Use synonyms
number
of old citizens gradually hiked to 10% in 2030 and is expected to surge to 27% in 2040.
In summary, Use synonyms
although
Japan started as the lowest country with ageing Linking Words
people
, it will surpass both the Use synonyms
USA
and Sweden Use synonyms
at the end
of the period.Linking Words
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