The graph below shows the average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Swedon, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates
average
CO2 emissions per human in the UK, Sweden, Portugal, and Italy from 1967 to 2007.
Correct article usage
the average
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that Italy and Portugal had an increase, while
the United KIngdom
and Sweden showed Correct your spelling
Kingdom
an
decrease.
In 1967, Italy with just above 4 Change the article
a
million
tonnes
was in the
third place on Correct article usage
apply
this
chart, but it presented a gradual grew up
to just over 6 Verb problem
growth
millions
in 1977. It Change to singular
million
is
Unnecessary verb
apply
contiuned
to Correct your spelling
continued
rising
and reached Wrong verb form
rise
his
peak Correct pronoun usage
its
point
at just under 8 million
after 20 years and was stable at this
level until the end of period
. Add an article
the period
In addition
, Portugal also
had the lowest point
at nearly 1 million
at the beginning of the period, and it went up to approximately 3 million
and soared to around 5 million
, in the years 1987 and 1997, respectively.
Moreover
, the UK had the highest point
at about 11 million
in the
1967 and was stable for one decade, but it started Correct article usage
apply
fell
slowly Change the verb form
to fall
after
time to time and reached Change preposition
from
his
minimum Correct pronoun usage
its
point
at almost 9 million
tonnes
. Finally
, Sweden was the second significant
country with roughly 9 Correct quantifier usage
most significant
million
tonnes
and it drammaticaly
rose to nearly 10 Correct your spelling
dramatically
million
. It started to went
down Change the verb
go
with
reaching around 7 Change preposition
apply
million
tonnes
in 1987 and after steady
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a steady
fell
Replace the word
fall
20
years, it Change preposition
for 20
got
Verb problem
reached
his
lowest number at just under 6 Correct pronoun usage
its
million
tonnes
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words million, tonnes, point with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
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