The graph below shows the average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Swedon, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates
average
CO2 emissions per human in the UK, Sweden, Portugal, and Italy from 1967 to 2007.
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the average
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that Italy and Portugal had an increase, Linking Words
while
the United Linking Words
KIngdom
and Sweden showed Correct your spelling
Kingdom
an
decrease.
In 1967, Italy with just above 4 Change the article
a
million
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tonnes
was in Use synonyms
the
third place on Correct article usage
apply
this
chart, but it presented a gradual Linking Words
grew up
to just over 6 Verb problem
growth
millions
in 1977. It Change to singular
million
is
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contiuned
to Correct your spelling
continued
rising
and reached Wrong verb form
rise
his
peak Correct pronoun usage
its
point
at just under 8 Use synonyms
million
after 20 years and was stable at Use synonyms
this
level until the end of Linking Words
period
. Add an article
the period
In addition
, Portugal Linking Words
also
had the lowest Linking Words
point
at nearly 1 Use synonyms
million
at the beginning of the period, and it went up to approximately 3 Use synonyms
million
and soared to around 5 Use synonyms
million
, in the years 1987 and 1997, respectively.
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Moreover
, the UK had the highest Linking Words
point
at about 11 Use synonyms
million
in Use synonyms
the
1967 and was stable for one decade, but it started Correct article usage
apply
fell
slowly Change the verb form
to fall
after
time to time and reached Change preposition
from
his
minimum Correct pronoun usage
its
point
at almost 9 Use synonyms
million
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tonnes
. Use synonyms
Finally
, Sweden was the second Linking Words
significant
country with roughly 9 Correct quantifier usage
most significant
million
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tonnes
and it Use synonyms
drammaticaly
rose to nearly 10 Correct your spelling
dramatically
million
. It started to Use synonyms
went
down Change the verb
go
with
reaching around 7 Change preposition
apply
million
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tonnes
in 1987 and after Use synonyms
steady
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a steady
fell
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fall
20
years, it Change preposition
for 20
got
Verb problem
reached
his
lowest number at just under 6 Correct pronoun usage
its
million
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tonnes
.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words million, tonnes, point with synonyms.
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