The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual ’ income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates
yearly
Correct article usage
the yearly
earning
of citizens of the United States in 2007, 2011 and 2015 based on different categories. Fix the agreement mistake
earnings
Overall
, all the categories of household did not change much except for $
100,000 or more earning family.
Correct article usage
the $
People
earning less than $25,000 were 25 million
in 2007. However
, this
number rose by 4 million
for next
4 years before dropping slightly in 2011. Correct article usage
the next
Similarly
, citizens scaling from $25,000 to $49,999 income also
started with slightly more than first
category with 27 Correct article usage
the first
million
people
in this
range. Their number also
increased to 30 million
in 2007 but again dropped to 28 million
in 2011. However
, $
50,000 to $74,999 earning category remained constant in all the years with 21 Correct article usage
the $
million
people
.
People
who earns
$75,000 to $99,999 were less than 15 Change the verb form
earn
million
in 2007 and 2011 but touched that mark by 2011. Last
category that earns more than $100,000 has shown significant growth from 28 Change the article
The last
million
in 2007 to 33 million
in 2011 before going to a low of 27 million
in 2007.Submitted by anash.suhail on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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