Some university students move away and live on their own while they are attending school, but others live at home with their family while they are students. Which do you think is a better choice? Give reasons to explain your answer.

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,
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'
university
living
place
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places
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are
divied
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divided
in to
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two groups which are living at home, and living
by
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their own. In my perspective,
university
students
should live at home, if it is possible
due to
couple
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of aspects, including precious
time
sharing with and
emotion
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support from family. Family
time
is essential for everyone
especially
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with parents.
Nowaday
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, people tend to have less family
time
with
your
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their
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family when each individual
get
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gets
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older,
therefore
university
life
might be the
last
chapter of your
life
without any other responsibilities like work and marriage.
For Instance
, in Thailand, the research found that more than 70
percent
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of Thai people
are living
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in
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a nucleus
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nucleus
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family after they
got
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married, around 27 years old. These show that Thai people might have
time
living
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to live
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with their
parent
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parents
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for less than four years after their graduation.
Moreover
, many
students
also
want some emotional
supports
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support
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from their family or
sibling
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siblings
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. In
university
life
which is more intense than high school
life
, especially with tough faculties like Engineering and Medicine. In these two
faculty
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,
students
have to face peer pressure from their genius friends, apart from various intensive courses,
hence
it is better for them to have another source of
emotion
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emotional
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support other than their college friends. To elaborate, many
case
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of
medical
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a medical
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student
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students
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who
living
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live
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by themselves in Thailand have reported about
commited
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committed
suicide from stress,
while
none of
medical
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the medical
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student who
living
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with their family has
once
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one
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. In conclusion, in my
opinion
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opinion,
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living at home with family is a better choice for every
university
students
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student
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, supported by two main reasons. One is having more leisure
time
with their family and
sibling
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siblings
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, and another is to gain another source of emotional
supports
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support
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which is not from your friends.
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