You are going to study in a college in the UK next year. You would like to stay in a college Hall of Residence. Write a letter to the college. In your letter explain your accommodation requirements explain what your food needs are ask what alternatives are available if they cannot provide what you want You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir / Madam, I hope you are doing amazing. I am writing
this
letter to inform you about the accommodation I want for my stay in the UK
while
I study.
Firstly
, I would prefer to live in the college hall residence until I get a private room to live in. I am a private kind of person and I prefer a clean and quiet place to stay. It helps to concentrate on the studies and get better scores in results.
Also
, I have pure a vegetarian since childhood so I hope there will be some arrangement of food for people like me to have some alternatives. If It could not be possible
then
I would like to live in a place where I can cook for myself.
Furthermore
, I know these requirements are basic but there will be a lot more students who
also
want the same accommodation as I need.
Additionally
, if I am not able to find the place of my choice please help me find another home to live in because as an international student, it will be difficult to get help from strangers. I hope to get a positive response. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely, Daman
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that paragraphs are focused on a single idea for better clarity. For instance, separate accommodation requirements from food needs.
task achievement
Consider proofreading for minor grammatical and phrasing issues. For example, "pure a vegetarian" should be "a pure vegetarian."
coherence cohesion
The letter successfully explains the requirements for accommodation and food, providing a clear and coherent response to the task.
task achievement
The tone is polite and appropriate for a formal letter, which is suitable for the context of writing to the college administration.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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