You recently moved to a different city and are looking for a place to stay. Write to a real estate agent and: ● explain why you want to move. ● mention what location would you prefer. ● describe the accommodation type that you need. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir or Madam,
This
letter is to enquire about accommodation on rent in Navi Mumbai from 1 October 2024.
I have recently accepted a job offer from an organization whose headquarters is situated in this
city. The mode of operation is work-from-office, so I have to travel 5 days a week. This
requires me to completely relocate to areas which are closer to the office location because commuting daily from Mumbai, my current residence, to Navi Mumbai is not possible. As a result
, I am looking to rent an apartment here.
I have shortlisted three sectors in the city namely Seawoods, Nerul and Vashi which are suitable for me. Any of these areas are closer to my company's location,
and has good public transport facilities Remove the comma
apply
as well as
local shops and markets to fulfil my daily requirements. However
, my top preference is Vashi, which is the closest and has a cosmopolitan neighbourhood, which I prefer.
I am looking for a 2-bedroom-kitchen apartment with balconies and western toilets. It should also
have a modular kitchen and semi-furnished with at least air conditioning being pre-installed. My budget is between INR 40,000 to 50,000 and the building should have lifts and a dedicated parking space. If there are flats under your purview which meet these requirements, then
I will be happy to take a look.
Looking forward to hearing back from you.
Yours Sincerely,
Nilesh MajumdarSubmitted by majumdarnilesh21 on
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Try to provide more specific details about what attracted you to the location and apartment type. This adds a personal touch and helps in gaining a more empathetic response from the reader.
coherence cohesion
The letter is structured very well, with clear paragraphs addressing each point asked for in the prompt.
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The writing tone is formal and polite, suitable for a letter to a real estate agent.
coherence cohesion
The closing of the letter is appropriately polite and conveys anticipation for the response, making it engaging.
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