The table and charts below give informations on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant

The table and charts below give informations on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant
The supplied table and pie chart
indicates
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data about the capitalism of
police
in 2017 and 2018 in a region of the UK and
also
the
amount
of
expenditure
on various sections. A glance at the graph reveals that the highest
amount
of
budget
source was from
national
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the national
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government.
However
, other sources did not have
budget
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a budget
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as much as others.
Moreover
, the highest percentage of
money
expenditure
was for salaries (officers and staff). Whilst, Technology was the lowest
amount
of spending
money
in the area of Britain over the period. In 2018, 177.8 million Euros was given to
police
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office
from
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national
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the national
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government
in
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the
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in a region of the UK, (which was the highest
amount
of
budget
over the period) just ahead of the
amount
of
budget
for
this
office
that
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which
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was 175.5 million Euros in 2017.
Furthermore
, the percentage of
money
spent
for
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the salaries of
police
officers and staff was 75% in 2017, (which was the highest
amount
of
money
spending
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over the whole year) compared to the
amount
of
money
expenditure
for
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on
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this
job at 69% in Britain in 2018.
In contrast
, other sources
such
as grants did not allocate much
budget
to
police
with 38 million Euros in 2017. (Which was the lowest
amount
of
money
given over the period).
Additionally
, only a tiny fraction of
police
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the police
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budget
was spent on technology in
police
at 8% in the UK in 2017. (Which was the
least
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lowest
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percentage of
money
expenditure
over the whole year).
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Vocabulary: Replace the words police, amount, expenditure, budget, money with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 8 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.

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