The pie charts show the electricity generated in Germany and France from all sources and renewable in the year 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts show the electricity generated in Germany and France from all sources and renewable in the year 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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These pie charts compare the
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source
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of
electircal
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electrical
generation in
France
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and
Germany
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in 2009. focusing on all types of
energy
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and renewables
one
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.
Overall
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, it is evident that conventional thermal
energy
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was the dominant
source
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in
Germany
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,
while
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France
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mostly relied on nuclear power.
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, in terms of
renewables
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renewable sources
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source
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,
biomass
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mainly
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used by
Germany
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,
whereas
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France
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heavily utilized hydroelectric power. In 2009,
Germany
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generated 59.6% of its electricity from conventional thermal sources, followed by 23% from nuclear
energy
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. Renewable sources with 17.4 % with
biomass
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accounting for the largest proportion at 80.5%, followed by wind at 36.9% and
hydroelectic
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hydroelectric
at 17.7%. Solar
energy
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and
geotherml
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geothermal
played a minor role with 6.1% and 0.0%, respectively.
In contrast
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,
France
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relied
primarly
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primarily
on nuclear power, which
accouted
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accounted
accounts
for 76% of its electricity production. Renewable
energy
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sources
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source
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made up
with
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13.7% and conventional thermal
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source
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sources
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contributed
to
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10.3%. In terms of renewables, hydroelectric was dominant at 80.5%,
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wind and
biomass
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accounting
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for 10.5% and 8.1%, respectively. Similar to
Germany
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, solar and geothermal
energy
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were the least significant, at 0.9% and 0.0%. In summary, conventional thermal and nuclear
energy
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dominated electricity generation in
Germany
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and
France
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, respectively, with
biomass
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and hydroelectric being the most used renewable sources in each country. Solar and geothermal remained negligible in both countries.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words source, france, germany, energy, biomass with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • generation
  • renewable sources
  • non-renewable sources
  • fossil fuels
  • nuclear energy
  • output levels
  • break down
  • hydroelectric
  • biomass
  • reliance
  • significant differences
  • unexpected findings
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