the pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. the table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during 1990s

the pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. the table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during 1990s
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The pie chart illustrates the primary causes of worldwide
land
degradation. The table depicts how deforestation, over-cultivation, over-grazing and other causes
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effects on regions
such
as North America, Europe and Oceania in 1990. When considered together, the information suggests that there were some links between the causes of
land
degradation worldwide and those in the mentioned three regions. All over the world, the major cause of lower productivity in agriculture was over-grazing, contributing 35% in total. It correlated with Oceania whose roughly 11.3 % of its area became less fertile
due to
this
reason. Forrest logging was the second biggest reason for worldwide soil damage, but in
Europe
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Europe,
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approximately 9.8 % of farming fields were damaged by
this
reason
and
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made
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it the first element for
this
. Meanwhile, excessive farming influenced North America the most, with 3.3% of its farms ruined by
this
practice
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contrary to Oceania which did not get any impact from
this
.
Overall
, extreme animal feeding came as the top influence for global
land
damage. Meanwhile, Europe was the area which underwent the biggest percentage of total
land
destruction.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words land with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Agricultural productivity
  • Deforestation
  • Over-cultivation
  • Overgrazing
  • Soil erosion
  • Nutrient depletion
  • Land degradation
  • Soil compaction
  • Fertility
  • Preventive measures
  • Sustainable farming practices
  • Environmental impact
  • Economic implications
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