the pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. the table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during 1990s
The pie chart illustrates the primary causes of worldwide
land
degradation. The table depicts how deforestation, over-cultivation, over-grazing and other causes gave
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as North America, Europe and Oceania in 1990. When considered together, the information suggests that there were some links between the causes of land
degradation worldwide and those in the mentioned three regions.
All over the world, the major cause of lower productivity in agriculture was over-grazing, contributing 35% in total. It correlated with Oceania whose roughly 11.3 % of its area became less fertile due to
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reason.
Forrest logging was the second biggest reason for worldwide soil damage, but in Europe
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. Meanwhile, excessive farming influenced North America the most, with 3.3% of its farms ruined by this
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Overall
, extreme animal feeding came as the top influence for global land
damage. Meanwhile, Europe was the area which underwent the biggest percentage of total land
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Vocabulary: Replace the words land with synonyms.
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