the pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. the table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during 1990s

The pie chart illustrates the primary causes of worldwide

land

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degradation. The table depicts how deforestation, over-cultivation, over-grazing and other causes

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effects on regions

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as North America, Europe and Oceania in 1990. When considered together, the information suggests that there were some links between the causes of

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degradation worldwide and those in the mentioned three regions. All over the world, the major cause of lower productivity in agriculture was over-grazing, contributing 35% in total. It correlated with Oceania whose roughly 11.3 % of its area became less fertile

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reason. Forrest logging was the second biggest reason for worldwide soil damage, but in

Europe

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approximately 9.8 % of farming fields were damaged by

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it the first element for

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. Meanwhile, excessive farming influenced North America the most, with 3.3% of its farms ruined by

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contrary to Oceania which did not get any impact from

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, extreme animal feeding came as the top influence for global

land

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damage. Meanwhile, Europe was the area which underwent the biggest percentage of total

land

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destruction.