The pie charts below give information about world population in 1900 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The given pie charts illustrate the data about the gavage of the
population
between 1900 and 2000. In the whole world including North Use synonyms
America
, Use synonyms
Latin
Use synonyms
America
, Use synonyms
Asia
, Africa and Use synonyms
others
.
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Overall
, the Linking Words
population
in 1900, Use synonyms
Asia
had the greatest index, Use synonyms
while
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Latin
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America
and Use synonyms
others
had the smallest scale. In 2000 occupiers had rocketed, and the highest citizens' extent had not changed, Use synonyms
however
, the lowest occupants had North Linking Words
America
and Use synonyms
others
.
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Asia
had an excessive Use synonyms
population
in 1900, taking 60% of the whole society Use synonyms
while
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Latin
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America
and Use synonyms
others
took only six out of a hundred ration, depicting the squat. North Use synonyms
America
and Africa provided nearly the same mark, 5% and 4% respectively. The whole populace was 1.6 billion at all.
In 2000's year, occupiers had raised by 4,4 billion people. The excessive community had Use synonyms
Asia
, Use synonyms
nonetheless
, 4% less than 100 years ago. Linking Words
Latin
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America
added the Caribbean, Use synonyms
the
total Rephrase
where the
population
was 8%. The stubbied rate of citizens had other countries with the same index in 1900.Use synonyms
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