The pie charts below give information about world population in 1900 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The given pie charts illustrate the data about the gavage of the
population
between 1900 and 2000. In the whole world including North America
, Latin
America
, Asia
, Africa and others
.
Overall
, the population
in 1900, Asia
had the greatest index, while
Latin
America
and others
had the smallest scale. In 2000 occupiers had rocketed, and the highest citizens' extent had not changed, however
, the lowest occupants had North America
and others
.
Asia
had an excessive population
in 1900, taking 60% of the whole society while
Latin
America
and others
took only six out of a hundred ration, depicting the squat. North America
and Africa provided nearly the same mark, 5% and 4% respectively. The whole populace was 1.6 billion at all.
In 2000's year, occupiers had raised by 4,4 billion people. The excessive community had Asia
, nonetheless
, 4% less than 100 years ago. Latin
America
added the Caribbean, the
total Rephrase
where the
population
was 8%. The stubbied rate of citizens had other countries with the same index in 1900.Submitted by a.seytzhanova on
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