The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps demonstrate the development of Westley throughout a two-century period from 185 to
present
.
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the present
Overall
, it is evident that the area has witnessed dramatic changes.Over the period, the site becomes more residential as various housing areas are built.
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To begin
with, Twine Toll Bridge which linked London to The Coach Inn was completely demolished; it was redeveloped as a railway station from the North to South of Westley. Linking Words
Moreover
, the trees in Lenton Woods were cut down to make way for houses.In line with Linking Words
this
, Church and The Coach Inn modernised as public amenities: sports centre,museum, and Westgate Shopping Centre.
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On the other hand
, nature like River Thame and Lake Lenton remained.Linking Words
In addition
,Market Square and Town Hall remained as before.Back Linking Words
then
. To the east of Town Hall, there are numerous accommodations. Linking Words
However
,it is converted into a Business and Residential Area. Linking Words
Nevertheless
, the roads are greatly extended from Tinton Village in the North to Shopping Complex in the South.Linking Words
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