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The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps demonstrate the development of Westley throughout a two-century period from 185 to
present
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Overall
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, it is evident that the area has witnessed dramatic changes.Over the period, the site becomes more residential as various housing areas are built.
To begin
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 with, Twine Toll Bridge which linked London to The Coach Inn was completely demolished; it was redeveloped as a railway station from the North to South of Westley.
Moreover
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, the trees in Lenton Woods were cut down to make way for houses.In line with
this
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, Church and The Coach Inn modernised as public amenities: sports centre,museum, and Westgate Shopping Centre.
On the other hand
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, nature like River Thame and Lake Lenton remained.
In addition
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,Market Square and Town Hall remained as before.Back
then
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. To the east of Town Hall, there are numerous accommodations.
However
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,it is converted into a Business and Residential Area.
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, the roads are greatly extended from Tinton Village in the North to Shopping Complex in the South.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • residential area
  • amenities
  • thoroughfare
  • connectivity
  • industrial development
  • factory
  • public amenities
  • recreational facilities
  • educational facilities
  • residential expansion
  • apartment blocks
  • commercial activity
  • shopping centers
  • restaurants
  • single-family homes
  • development
  • open field
  • noticeable change
  • replacing
  • establishment
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