The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table and charts below illustrate data on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in Britain.
Overall
, we can see that the table clarifies information about what is the sources of the money
, However
, the chart explains where the money
spent.
In both years National Government was the main source of the police budget with around 17.5 million
and 177.8 million
for 2017 and 2018. However
Other sources (eg grants) contributed around 28 million
in 2017 and 38.5 million
in 2018 as the lowest source of money
. Local taxes also
contributed a large amount of 92.2 million
in 2017 and a little over 100 million
in 2018.
Salaries of officers and staff took around three quarter
of the Fix the agreement mistake
quarters
money
in 2017 at 75 percent
and in 2018 at 69 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
. Change the spelling
per cent
While
,
Buildings and transport took around 17 per cent for both years with limited change on the amount of Remove the comma
apply
money
. Technology had
seen a significant rise as in 2017 it was 8 per cent. Wrong verb form
has
However
, in 2018 it was almost double with around 14 per cent of the total spent.Submitted by seifhasseb222 on
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