The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
These maps provide key information about the changes in a small village called Bunborough. Wich planning to build a train line to connect Lynwich with Bunborough.
Overall
. It is clear to the naked eye that some of the houses changed their places from the left side of the road to the right side of the street, and the total number is
increased from 6 houses Verb problem
has
this
time to 7 homes in 2024. However
, it seems like the beach in the future were no longer active, and they remake
the fishing part to make a promenade.
Wrong verb form
remade
Nevertheless
, when it comes to what inside
the village, it is possible to see that there is no difference between the number of shops in the present and the shops in the future, the reason for Add a missing verb
is inside
that is
because the shops is
not in the operation area to build the railway. Change the verb form
are
In other words
, there is no need to change or to move the stores to another location.Submitted by sdam7843 on
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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