The maps below show the campus at present and how it will look like in the future. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below show the campus at present and how it will look like in the future. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The blueprints above contrast the current layout of

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campus and a proposed reform plan expected to be implemented.

According to

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the pictures, the campus will significantly decrease green areas in order to accommodate more new buildings.

Additionally

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, a new road and a car park exclusive for staff will be added as well. The new car park is situated in the southwest corner, precisely between the two roads, one of which is the new road, extending from the road to the south. Regarding the original car park in the northeast corner, it will remain and be

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only to students.

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to the changes already mentioned, several building projects are

also

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planned.

First,

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at the existing green area to the north, they plan to add a genetic building, next to which a bioimaging facility will be constructed.

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the original biotech building will be expanded as well, occupying all available space beyond the walkway.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

155 words

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The maps below show the campus at present and how it will look like in the future. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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