You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The maps below show the campus at present and how it will look like in the future. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The blueprints above contrast the current layout of
a
campus and a proposed reform plan expected to be implemented.
Correct article usage
the
According to
the pictures, the campus will significantly decrease green areas in order to accommodate more new buildings. Additionally
, a new road and a car park exclusive for staff will be added as well.
The new car park is situated in the southwest corner, precisely between the two roads, one of which is the new road, extending from the road to the south. Regarding the original car park in the northeast corner, it will remain and be opened
only to students.
Replace the word
open
In addition
to the changes already mentioned, several building projects are also
planned. First,
at the existing green area to the north, they plan to add a genetic building, next to which a bioimaging facility will be constructed. Next,
the original biotech building will be expanded as well, occupying all available space beyond the walkway.Submitted by hx88375757 on
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