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The bart chart below shows US Seafood imports between 2002 and 2022 and the forecast for 2032. The pie chart shows the geographical structure of these imports in 2022. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bart chart below shows US Seafood imports between 2002 and 2022 and the forecast for 2032. The pie chart shows the geographical structure of these imports in 2022. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph illustrates the purchase of seafood by the United States of America from different countries between 2002 to 2032 in
billion
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 US
dollars
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 and the proportion of the pie chart depicts the export of seafood from different nations to the United States of America in 2022.
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, it can be seen from the bar diagram the imports increased every year from the beginning and are forecasted, will decrease in the final year.
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, from the pie chart display
China
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 and Thailand were dominating in export to the United States of America.
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, Ecuador, Vietnam, Other, and Indonesia exported the least as compared to
China
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, Thailand, and Canada. It is conspicuous that the bar graph shows the US import of seafood was 7
billion
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dollars
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 in 2002, which expanded sharply and hit 20
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dollars
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 in 2022, after that it will touch 18
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dollars
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 in 2032, after a decade. Probing ahead, the pie diagram explains
China
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's exports by 28% in 2022, which is the highest among all countries.
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, Thailand and Canada showed less growth than
China
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, 23% and 16% in the same year respectively.
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, Indonesia and Others exported 9% in 2022.
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, Vietnam and Ecuador sold 8% and 7% respectively in 2022.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words billion, dollars, china with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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