The graph below shows the number of tourists visting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and repoting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. 

Summarise the information by selecting and repoting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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of tourists who visit a Caribbean
island
categorized by their staying place from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
, it can be seen that the total
number
of visitors increased considerably every year,
while
those who preferred staying on cruise ships during the trip were significantly higher than visitors living on the
island
. In 2010, the total
number
of tourists was relatively high, accounting for 1
million
, and
then
rose significantly reaching 2.7
million
in 2016 before surging to 3.5
million
at the end
of the given period. In comparison, those who stayed on the
island
began at 0.75
million
in
number
, which remained constant for 1 year. Afterwards, its figure showed a gradual incline to 1.5
million
by 2013 and stayed consistently at the same level til the end of the given period, with a minimal drop to 1.5
million
in 2016.
However
, visitors who stayed in the cruise section started with a lower
number
with 0.25
million
followed by a considerable rise to 2
million
, surpassing people living on cruise ships in 2017. In summary, both types of travellers experienced an increase in
number
during 7 years, with those who stayed on
island
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showing a modest incline compared to another one.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island, number, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "considerably" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuating trend
  • initially
  • significant increase
  • slight decline
  • momentary setback
  • steady increase
  • minor fluctuations
  • reaching a peak
  • moderate growth
  • notable growth
  • surge in popularity
  • seasonal or yearly factors
  • stagnation
  • growing appeal
  • visitors worldwide
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