The map shows the development of the village of Rye mouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The map shows the development of the village of Rye mouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The two
map
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maps
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illustrate how the village of Rye
mouth
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Mouth
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changed from 1996 and today .
overall
, There is
the
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an
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increase in housing,
any
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apply
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significant shifts in residential layouts and the development of the transportation infrastructure. The presence of apartments in the present
were
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fish
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a fish
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market back
1995
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in 1995
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and The number of houses
are
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is
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increasing. New bridge and road construction. The replacement of green space in the farmland and the forest park by next sports clubs, and restaurants
instead
of shops
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • development
  • transformation
  • residential areas
  • infrastructure
  • connectivity
  • commercial development
  • public services
  • green spaces
  • recreational areas
  • economic growth
  • lifestyle changes
  • quality of life
  • sustainability
  • layout
  • connectivity
  • impact
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