The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accomodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accomodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
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The following chart illustrates the proportion of households owning and renting accommodation in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011. At first glance, it is evident that most households lived in rented
houses
in 1918, compared to 2011,
which
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most people owned their accommodation. Another interesting point is that the number of people who lived in rental
houses
were
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almost as much as those who owned their living place. Looking at the details,
although
almost eight out of ten families rented their
houses
in 1918,
this
trend experienced a slight fall in 1939 with less than 70%
,
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and
then
levelled off in 1953.
Following
this
, the number of people with rental
houses
dropped gradually from 1953 to 1991, ending
with
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at more than 30%. Interestingly, after a slow fall in 2001, it had a moderate rise in 2011. In terms of households in owned accommodation,
while
it started with more than 20% in 1918, it rose over the 83 years and hit the peak of nearly 70% in 2001.
However
, the percentage of families who
owened
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owned
their house fell from 2001 to 2011 by likely 5%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words houses with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • households
  • owned accommodation
  • rented accommodation
  • England
  • Wales
  • chart
  • between
  • trends
  • increase
  • decrease
  • fluctuate
  • rise
  • fall
  • peak
  • significant
  • gradual
  • sharp
  • steady
  • dramatic
  • overall
  • range from
  • at the beginning of
  • at the end of
  • over the period
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