WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how one type of coal is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The diagram above outlines the production and processing of coal used to generate
electricity
. In general
there are 4 steps Add a comma
general,
how
Change preposition
in how
electricity
from coal can be distributed to homes and industries as the customers: mining and extraction, transportation, generation and transmissions and distribution.
Coal is firstly
mined from below the Change the word
first
earth
surface. The extracted coal is Change noun form
earth's
then
sent to the crushing facility where it will be broken into smaller and uniform size
. After that, the crushed coal is placed in the stockpile before being transported to the Fix the agreement mistake
sizes
power
plant
by trucks. In the power
plant
, the coal will entered firstly
into Correct article usage
a gassifier
gassifier
for combustion. In Correct your spelling
gasifier
this
plant
, coal is burnt to generate gas
that will be sent to the gas
power
plant
. However
, this
gas
will go through cooling
system prior to Correct article usage
a cooling
enter
the Wrong verb form
entering
gas
power
plant
. From gasification
process, there are Correct article usage
the gasification
also
produced the offgas
which is exhausted Correct your spelling
off-gas
thourgh
a chimney and solid waste that should be sent to a treatment facility.
In the Correct your spelling
through
gas
power
plant
, the coal gas
will be used to drive the turbines and generate electricity
. The produced electricity
is then
saved in the substation before distributing it to the customers. In addition
, to the electricity
, the power
plant
also
generates a by-product namely heat waste which can be disposed of or recovered as a new resource of energy.Submitted by drl14 on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, firstly".
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, power, plant, gas with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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