WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how one type of coal is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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The diagram above outlines the production and processing of coal used to generate

electricity

. In

general

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general,

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there are 4 steps

how

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in how

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electricity

from coal can be distributed to homes and industries as the customers: mining and extraction, transportation, generation and transmissions and distribution. Coal is

firstly

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first

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mined from below the

earth

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earth's

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surface. The extracted coal is

then

sent to the crushing facility where it will be broken into smaller and uniform

size

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. After that, the crushed coal is placed in the stockpile before being transported to the

power

plant

by trucks. In the

power

plant

, the coal will entered

firstly

into

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a gassifier

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gassifier

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gasifier

for combustion. In

this

plant

, coal is burnt to generate

gas

that will be sent to the

gas

power

plant

However

this

gas

will go through

cooling

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a cooling

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system prior to

enter

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entering

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the

gas

power

plant

. From

gasification

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the gasification

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process, there are

also

produced the

offgas

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off-gas

which is exhausted

thourgh

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through

a chimney and solid waste that should be sent to a treatment facility. In the

gas

power

plant

, the coal

gas

will be used to drive the turbines and generate

electricity

. The produced

electricity

then

saved in the substation before distributing it to the customers.

In addition

, to the

electricity

, the

power

plant

also

generates a by-product namely heat waste which can be disposed of or recovered as a new resource of energy.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, firstly".

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, power, plant, gas with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12Grammar mistakes
 

3 paragraphs

224 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how one type of coal is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

In the modern world, many employees lack soft skill such as communication and working in the teams. What are the main causes of this problem? What are the effects of the lack of such skills ?

The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people think that getting old is a negative thing, whereas others think it is much easier for people to live in modern society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?