the table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.
The table below shows data about different consumer spending in five different countries in 2002.
Generally, people from
Turkey
spend their money mostly on Food/Drinks/Tobacco and leisure/Education, Use synonyms
while
Italy citizens spend Linking Words
to
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on
the
Clothing/Footwear.
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apply
Firstly
, as we can see from the table citizens of Ireland and Linking Words
Turkey
spend money on Food/drinks/Tobacco Use synonyms
in
Change preposition
at
the
similar level, which is 28.91 per Correct article usage
a
cent
and 32.14 per Use synonyms
cent
respectively. Use synonyms
On the other hand
people from the other three countries (Italy, Spain, Sweden) spend Linking Words
many
less than citizens of Correct quantifier usage
much
Turkey
and Ireland, especially less to the nearly 10-12 per Use synonyms
cent
. Use synonyms
However
, the country that spends mostly on Linking Words
the
Clothing/Footwear was Italy with 9 per Correct article usage
apply
cent
. Countries like Ireland, Spain and Use synonyms
Turkey
have Use synonyms
similar
percentage which is around 6.5 per Correct article usage
a similar
cent
, Use synonyms
while
Sweden is slightly less (5.40 per Linking Words
cent
).
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In addition
, on Linking Words
the
top of Correct article usage
apply
spendings
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spending
to
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apply
the
Leisure/Education was Correct article usage
apply
also
Linking Words
Turkey
with 4.35 per Use synonyms
cent
. Next Use synonyms
is
Sweden and Italy which Correct subject-verb agreement
are
has
slightly similar Correct subject-verb agreement
have
index
, 3.20 and 3.22 per Fix the agreement mistake
indexes
cent
respectively. Use synonyms
On the
third Change preposition
The
plays
Fix the agreement mistake
play
is
Spain which has Correct your spelling
in
significant
difference in Add an article
a significant
the
spending (1.98 per Correct article usage
apply
cent
).Use synonyms
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