the most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Science

play

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a crucial role in our modem society, it creates

technology

, medicine, and many more. Some argue that the primary goal of

science

must be to enhance the quality of

peoples

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people's

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lives. I strongly agree with

this

statement because

science

mostly

focused

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on innovation that could improve

humans

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health. One of the most significant ways

science

improves

peoples

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lives is through

advancement

in healthcare. Scientific

reasearch

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research

has played a vital role in

advancement

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the advancement

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on

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of

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healthcare, through scientific research, doctors and

scientist

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scientists

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could find cures for diseases that are incurable. One example of

this

is the cure

of

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cancer, many people don't know that through scientific research there is a cure for cancer which is

chemotherapy

. By using

chemotherapy

,

this

technology

kills all the cancer cells within the

patients

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body. Even though

chemotherapy

has

alot

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a lot

of effects on your body,

but

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do not worry, because of

this

advancement

in healthcare doctors and

scientist

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has

create

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a new

technology

called Ozone

therapy

,

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which improved

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improved

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improves

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circulation,

increased

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oxygen levels in cells, and stimulation of the immune system

..

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This

O/onc

therapy

is very useful for patients who are undergoing

chemotherapy

because

with

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the use of ozone

therapy

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it makes the patient feel refreshed and

less

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pain when they

arc

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are

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doing

chemotherapy

.

Science

has

revolutionalized

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techonology

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technology

, making daily life for other people way

more simple

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simpler

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and less complicated. Technological

innovation

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innovations

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such

as the

internet

and

smartphones

has

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significantly

improve

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the way we communicate with each other. Thanks to the work of

science

,

internet

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the internet

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and

smartphones

has

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made instant communication possible, calling from different countries in an instant just with the use of

internet

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and

smartphones

. Not just through

technology

but

science

has improved transportation,

such

as

high speed

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trains like the

shinkansen

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that is

manufactured in Japan. It only

needs

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1-2 hours for the train to reach from one city to another city. The

advancement

of transportation has reduced

the

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travel times and environmental impact. 

Inconclusion

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,

science

plays a crucial role in enhancing human

well being

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by making

advancement

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advancements

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on

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in

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health care and transportation. Through scientific

progress

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progress,

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we have seen significant improvements

of

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in

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healthcares

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healthcare

such

as

chemo

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chemotherapy

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therapy

and ozone

therapy

. Not only that but there

is

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are

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also

significant improvements

on

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in

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technology

such

as

high speed

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high-speed

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trains,

shinkansen

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and shinkansen

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that

is

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are

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made by Japan.

Internet

and

smartphones

for instant communication.

Therefore

,

i

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strongly believe that the primary goal of

science

is to focus on improving

peoples

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people's

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lives.