The table shows the cost of water in five cities in Australia. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows the cost of water in five cities in Australia. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given table illustrates the data on the expense of water in five different towns in Australia.
Overall
, it can be observed that in
Melbourne
and Sydney, the cost up to 125Kl and over 125Kl is the same
while
, in the remaining 3 cities charge surges.
Furthermore
, the annual bill per house in
Melbourne
is significantly less in comparison with the remaining 4 metropolises.
To begin
with, in Adelaide, the water usage change per Kiloliter (up to 125KL) is 0.42
dollars
and it is more than double($1.00) if the usage
is
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overtakes 125
KL
.
Similarly
, in Perth, it is 0.42
dollars
and will become over triple ($1.50) if used over 125
Kl
. In the remaining 3 cities, Brisbane shows only a minor change of 0.03
dollars
whilst the other 2 cities,
Melbourne
and Sydney take similar charge regardless of water usage. The mean bill per household in Adelaide, Brisbane, Perth, and Sydney is $312, $310, $332, and $319 respectively.
However
, for
Melbourne
, it is far less and is equal to 253
dollars
.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words melbourne, kl, dollars with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cost of living
  • urban infrastructure
  • utility rates
  • supply and demand
  • metropolitan areas
  • water consumption
  • price variation
  • tariff systems
  • economic factors
  • budget allocation
  • household expenditure
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