The graph below shows the changes in production (millions)of three products in a garment factory from 1990 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The differences in
production
of Add an article
the production
three
products in a garment factory between the years 1990 and 2010 is
demonstrated in the graph below.
Overview, all of the Correct subject-verb agreement
are
three
products are more produced in 2010 than they were in the 90's. Although
coats
were the least produced product in 1990, it has successfully became
the most produced product out of all Change the verb form
become
three
products in 2010.
Suits were the most produced clothes back in 1990. About fifteen miliion
suits were produced during that year. The Correct your spelling
million
production
of suits increased to it's
highest peak in 1995 . Later on, it decreased Correct your spelling
its
then
icreased
again until it became the second Correct your spelling
increased
least produced
product in the garment factory in 2010.
Add a hyphen
least-produced
On the other hand
, coats
and dresses
were the least produced clothes in 1990. There were only about 7 million coats
produced at the time, while
the production
of dresses
was slightly higher by about three
millions
. The Change to singular
million
production
of both of the clothes increased through out
the years but the Correct your spelling
throughout
production
of coats
had the sharpest increase. It became the most produced
cloth in the factory by 2010. Add a hyphen
most-produced
Dresses
had a minimal increase in production
through out
the years and there were barely fifteen million Correct your spelling
throughout
dresses
produced in the year 2010.Submitted by tarteeidris on
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