Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education and that governments should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is thought by some that everyone should be entitled to higher

education

, and

this

should be made free to

puilpils

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pupils

by the

government

without considering their financial capability. In my opinion,

i

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agree that university

education

should be made free

,

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because

education

is important for growth in every society.

Firstly

,

i

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believe that every citizen of a particular

country

is entitled to free

education

. starting from the Primary, Secondary and university

education

without considering if they have the financial capacity to afford it or not.

This

is because as

a

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citizens

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citizens

of a

country

, there is so much we give

such

as payment of tax,

obeying

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and obeying

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the rules and regulations of the

country

.

As a result

of

this

, the

Government

is expected to give back to the

patroitic

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patriotic

Citizens

.

For example

, An individual who has given his all as a military personnel, and dies during active service, Apparently, left some children behind. It is going to be a good thing for the

government

to make sure they take up the

reesponsibility

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responsibility

of training

up

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the children. Apparently, the

Government

is giving back to the

citizen

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citizens

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by doing

this

. Another Point to consider

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is the fact that if the

Government

can allow everyone

have

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access to free

Education

,

this

is going to help the

country

grow its

infrasturcture

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infrastructure

, and most importantly in all spheres of the

country

.

This

is because the more learned people a

country

has, the better

sturucture

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structure

it has, and

less

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poverty the

country

is likely to encounter.

For Example

. students who were given free

opportuinty

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opportunity

to study, Engineering, Medicine, Accounting, Business Administration and other courses,

willl

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will

automatically be

a

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professional

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professionals

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upon graduation. Apparently, upon completion, they will be employed by the

country

, and be willing to make

impact

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an impact

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in their various fields, and give back to the

country

that

hgave

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gave

have

them the

opportuinity

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opportunity

to achieve

this

. In Conclusion,

i

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believe that everyone has

that

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right to

free

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university

education

, and

this

is going to be a way for

government

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the government

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to give back to

her

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its

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citizens

and

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this

would

also

assist in creating a wider range of civilization and exposure for the

citizens

.