The charts below show the amount of financial aid that four nations received and how the money was spent in 1974 and 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The chart illustrates the amount of monetary aid that China, Indonesia, Thailand and South Africa received and how it was spent in
fourty
years period of time from 1974 to 2014.
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forty
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of money that was spent Add an article
the amount
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medicine and finance was slightly decreased, Change preposition
on
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the expense
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expenses
for
catering Change preposition
of
was
sharply declined.
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aid was Add an article
the financial
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spent on catering and finance respectivelyCorrect your spelling
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