The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The bar charts describe the
percetages
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percentage
percentages
employment
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the employment
population
between men
and women aged 60-64 in several countries. Overall
, aged
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the aged
population
who were still employed were dominated by men
in these countries, even though there were some percentage
changes in 30 years.
In Correct article usage
the men
men
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men's
population
, Japan
had the biggest percentage
of employment
aged Replace the word
employed
men
in 1970, with 85% of overall
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the overall
population
who were still employed. Japan
were
followed by Belgium, Australia, and the USA who had more than 70% in Change the verb form
was
employment
for
each country. Change preposition
apply
However
, the percentage
had a massive drop in the next 30 years, where Belgium had the biggest downfall, with around 60%.
Meanwhile, the percentage
of aged women who were still in employment
remained
not change in all countries. The biggest proportion of aged women in Verb problem
did
employment
in 1970 was Japan
with 43%, Change preposition
in Japan
then
it had a slight decline to 40% in 2000. Japan
was followed by the USA, Australia, and Belgium with a change not
more than 3% in 1970 and 2000.Change preposition
of not
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