The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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male
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males
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working under the age group of 60 to 64 in the year 1970 and in 2000 where the Fix the agreement mistake
females
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USA
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the USA
Japan
and Australia
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the maximum
79
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USA
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experienced less Unnecessary verb
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employment
12% than Japan
. Conversely
,in 2000 Belgium showed a drastic change in employment
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the employment
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compared
60
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Japan
was number
in Correct article usage
the number
employment
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USA
and Australia.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words usa, japan, employment with synonyms.
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