The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparions where relecant.
The diagram illustrates the
stepping
of manufacturing instant Fix the agreement mistake
steps
noodles
, starting from stroaging
floor in Correct your spelling
staging
solis
to labelling and sealing noodle cups to market, Change the capitalization
Solis
this
process takes 8 steps to complete.
To begin
with, the floor is delivered by large vehicle to store in silos and then
transported to combine with other components including water and oil in the mixer, after that this mixing ingredients
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this mixing ingredient
these mixing ingredients
is
passed through the rollers forming a dough followed by cutting Correct subject-verb agreement
are
in to
the Join the words
into
noodles
discs by dough strips. This
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These noodle
noodles
discs then
are cooked and dried before putting in
cups and adding some vegetables and spices. For the final process, these cups are Correct pronoun usage
them in
labeled
and sealed before selling to the customers.
In summary, making instant Change the spelling
labelled
noodles
requires 8 steps begins
with Wrong verb form
beginning
stroaging
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stroking
floor
in silos, transporting them to mix with water and oil, creating Correct article usage
the floor
noodles
by rolling, stripping and then
cooking and drying, adding vegetables and spices before labelling and sealling
in the Correct your spelling
sealing
selling
last
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