The map below show the centre of a small twon called Islip as it is now, plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparions where relevant.

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The maps illustrate the

centre

of a small town called Islip in the present day compared to the future planned development of

this

town.

Overall

, it can be seen that the

centre

area

will be improved by

construction

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the construction

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of the new building.

Additionally

, the former main

road

will be removed with

new

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a new

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dual carriageway

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dual-carriageway

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roundabout. Nowadays, the

centre

area

is occupied by accommodations on the south of the main

road

, which is surrounded by shops along both sides. In the north part, there is a countryside

area

separated by an avenue. The school is located in

southwest

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the southwest

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and the park is located in

southeast

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the southeast

a southeast

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area

connected by an extended

road

from the main

road

According to

the future plan, the main

road

will be replaced with

pedestrian

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a pedestrian

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area

while

the former extended

road

will form a roundabout with a dual carriageway, surrounding the

centre

area

. The essential

structure

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structures

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including a park, school and old house

area

will exist.

However

, the countryside

area

will be replaced by a bus station, shopping

centre

, car park and new housing for accommodation with

further

citizens.

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