The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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The graph here presented describes, during the
year
, the medium temperature registered every month in the cities of London
, New York
and Sydney
. The table, instead
, indicates the sum of all the hours
of sunshine in one year
in the same cities.
In the graph, at first sight, it is clearly shown that while
in London
and New York
, the temperature’s curves have a similar escalation, with an increase from January
to July and a decrease from July to December, in Sydney
it is the exact opposite.
It is interesting how the temperatures in New York
, compared to the ones in the other two cities, reach both the highest and lowest peaks: it’s registered an average of 30 degrees
in July and 5 degrees
in January
and December.
London
follows a similar pattern to the one of the Big Apple,
but with less cold Remove the comma
apply
January
, February and December. **Although
**, from April to November, the temperatures in London
do not reach the ones in New York
, but still increase until a peak in July of 25 degrees
.
Sydney
instead
, starts its year
with a hot January
, but then
the temperatures start to decrease until a below in July of 15 degrees
. It is visible how even the lowest temperature registered in Sydney
of 15 degrees
is far from the cold 5 and 10 degrees
in London
and New York
.
Regarding the total hours
of sunshine in a year
, New York
shows the highest average, with the amount of 2,535 hours
, **immediately** followed by Sydney
with a similarly
high number. That is
not the case for London
, the British capital only registered 1,180 hours
where the sun shined.Submitted by matilderestelli.work on
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