You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph shows the percentages of Australian exports with four countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The line graph shows the percentages of Australian exports with four countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

You should write at least 150 words.
The line chart provides the percentages of Australian exports with four nations from 1990 until 2012. 
Overall
, there are four nations, and each one of them is different in rate. Japan first decreased and after that almost stayed the same, for China which shows an increase, America went through both states up and down, India the same as the US. Starting with Japan in 1990 was 25% and went down to 20% in 1995 and
after
this
year decreased to reach 18% and stayed the same until 2012, China,
on the other hand
, was 0% in 1990 and went up to become 5% in 2000, and significantly increased from 2000 until 2010 to reach 25% and stayed after that in the same number.
Moreover
, America began at 10% in 1990 and went down a little in 1995 to become 8% and increased in 2000 to again 10%, from 2000 until 2010, decreasing to arrive at 5% in 2010 and eventually going up to 7% in 2012, India stayed in rate from 1990 until 2000, and after that increased from 2000 and 2010 to become almost 7%,
however
, it went up to 5% in 2012.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentages" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "went down" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • line graph
  • percentage
  • fluctuate
  • steady increase/decrease
  • notable rise/drop
  • peak
  • trough
  • comparative analysis
  • export destinations
  • trade relations
  • upsurge
  • downturn
  • economic ties
  • exponential growth
  • over the period
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