You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie chart shows the percentage of persons arrested in the five years ending 1994 and the bar chart shows the most recent reasons for arrest. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The charts illustrate the
arrested
rate among two genders, Replace the word
arrest
men
and women
, in the five years ending 1994 and the latest causes for jailed
.
Replace the word
jail
Overall
, it is evident that most of prisoners
in Add an article
the prisoners
five
years ending 1994 Correct article usage
the five
was
mostly males, and the main reason to be arrested for both sexes Correct subject-verb agreement
were
is
public drinking.
Wrong verb form
was
To begin
with, the pie chart showed that males and females have a significant difference in the number of custodial sentences in five years ending 1994. There was 32% of males got jailed and the rest of the percentage was freed, which was 68%. Whereas
, it was only 9% of females who got arrested and there was 91% of free females.
Moving to the bar chart, most of the prisoners
is
convicted Correct subject-verb agreement
are
by
drinking in a public space, amounting to around 31% and 37% for Change preposition
of
men
and women
, respectively. Following
this
, around 25% of men
prisoners
are objected to drink
Change the verb form
drinking
while
driving and nearly 20% of women
prisoners
punished because of doing
assault and other reasons. Unnecessary verb
apply
Then
, the arrested men
have similar percentages to approximately 15% by doing breach of order, assault, theft, and other reasons. Meanwhile, women
who breach of
Change preposition
apply
order
and Fix the agreement mistake
orders
stealing
are about 13%. Both of the genders who do not have Replace the word
steal
answer
have the least share, accounting for below 10% of all the reasons.Fix the agreement mistake
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Vocabulary: Replace the words men, women, prisoners with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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